- My particular project, based on what my peers and myself believe, includes the affirm and add aspect of “engaging in the conversation”. Though it contains this, I do not believe that it has enough of that. My paper needs to directly reference the original papers more rather than just using them to prove a point. I have to be more specific on what my narratives are revealing and relate that back to Alexander, Williams, or Brandt.
- My peers claim that my introductions to my quotes are good and do not need to be changed, but I am lacking an overall introduction of all of scholarly articles in the introduction paragraphs. I forgot to introduce the articles I was using in the intro so that is one major revision which i will be doing to make my paper better.
- For this I did well with using scholarly articles as well as literacy narratives. I went deep into Alexanders paper when looking for what he discusses about outsider narratives. What I need to do is go deeper into other sources such as Williams and Brandt. Though I did use two scholarly articles, I need to go deeper into the other rather than keeping one as my main focus.
