Within my significant project, I worked hard to make sure that my third project fixed the major issues which I had with my previous papers. First, too confront the issues with my introduction paragraphs, I looked back at the papers which we were given on how to type introduction paragraphs in order to attempt to perfect my last chance at an introduction. I worked to add a specific claim and hook for the paper in order to grab the readers attention as well as clue them into what the paper would be about. This is seen in my introduction of the paper linked below. Secondly, I worked to fix the formatting of my papers. When I first entered this class, I would write classic 5 paragraph essays and they would not stand out. As time progressed I tried to veer off of the classic essay format by including at least one other paragraph that isn’t set up like the rest in order to provide more evidence towards the claim. This is seen in my second to last paragraph in the link below.

The Birth of Outsiders in Modern Education